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Breaking Her In

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/25/07

Another gay guy talking

It is always the same the same phrases, attitudes. Man Meat unless you count a cannibal.

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by Anonymous07/26/07

hmmm

ow

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by Anonymous07/26/07

to all strip club jerks

this story was great. you know, generally this stuff doesn't happen in a strip joint, but then again for $500 why wouldn't it? plus how can you hate the ending.

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by skywriterxxx07/26/07

could have been great, but...

the author apparently has some issues with being respectful to women - yes, even strippers. Too bad, about the first half was looking like a decent story. Could have been a great story - was going that direction, then, whammy, the guy turns asshole. Why??

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by Anonymous08/01/07

Here's the followup story

Part 2: Ashley rats out Frank to his wife then takes the $500 and hires a goon to beat the crap out of him. Does anyone really get off on such abuse of women?

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