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i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along to the Poetry Forum and join in with other poets. - wildsweetone (the 50% rating is so that it does not affect future temp ratings).
Excellent
A critique looking for a critque. Clever poet :) I enjoyed your word choices, but mostly fell in love with your subject matter. Keep on challenging your peers. It's how we all get better, yes?
Another excellent comment.
You have a gift and you're sharing it with all of us, thank you.
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