All Comments on 'Coquette and her Cuckold Ch. 01'

by Clayton Long

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Crap

This is a disaster. The "writer" has no skill at writing, no imagination, and only a third grader's understanding of punctuation and grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
fair to middling as they say

Not so bad. Reasonably hot writing, although on a theme most sane people find off-putting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
When does the story begin?

He has a mindless slut for a wife, who flirts with any and everything, see that dog? Now he waits for her to fuck another man. Does he get any of Claudia? No of course not she is to tired from laying on the deck chairs with her high heels flipping around.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Loved it! What happens next?

I like the different style and the way you handled it. The important thing is that it will make my wife horny when I tell it to her. I will wait for part two first.

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
1*

Another story about a queer.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

I can see a cuckold playing croquet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good start - very erotic characters

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