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Crap
This is a disaster. The "writer" has no skill at writing, no imagination, and only a third grader's understanding of punctuation and grammar.
fair to middling as they say
Not so bad. Reasonably hot writing, although on a theme most sane people find off-putting.
When does the story begin?
He has a mindless slut for a wife, who flirts with any and everything, see that dog? Now he waits for her to fuck another man. Does he get any of Claudia? No of course not she is to tired from laying on the deck chairs with her high heels flipping around.
Loved it! What happens next?
I like the different style and the way you handled it. The important thing is that it will make my wife horny when I tell it to her. I will wait for part two first.
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Another story about a queer.
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