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by wildsweetone07/16/07

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i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. - wildsweetone (the 50% rating is so that it does not affect future temp ratings).

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by twelveoone07/21/07

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The Epilogue was better than the poem. The last two lines a startling image, not orginal, but good. The rest, well, avoid rhyme, dosen't serve a purpose here.

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