All Comments on 'Tickling Heather'

Very good for a first story, I've seen many, many first attempts not nearly this good. This was very readable, flowed well and was quite erotic, my only suggestions would be that you slow down the pace a bit and intersperse the dialogue with what the main charectar is thinking to add a bit more depth.

good start keep playing with those panties and more chapters needed

Written well enough to be a true story . Nice work .

You had a good story idea. However it was diffult to follow because the writing was so pathetic.

good writing! loved the combination of tickling, family (mother) and sex. carry on your mission.