All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 09'

Whew. I really almost liked this little story. You is a really good writer. Jump on it son, let's get the next chapter going.

A complex and ruthless character we see in Guy Door. I have no doubt that there are plans for him in the future within the mind of our wizard ;)

Well done, Dark. This series is really picking up.

Did you have to give Slyc another bad guy to use? Lol Seriously good job hun, yet another writer I'm looking forward to working with on this chain. Very cool.

I enjoyed your chapter quite a bit. This newest pawn will be fun to incorporate into the story. Excellent writing as usual. :D Thanks for joining the chain.

... to see what havoc Badgemagus and Guy will cause in that sleepy kingdom.

Let the mayhem begin!

Maharat

guy is the coolest rogue since Mat Cathon of the wheel of time series.

I'm really enjoying the story but each author seems more concerned with adding secondary characters rather than telling the story. The central story line is barely touched upon while new characters are added. It sends the story in fifteen different directions that detract from the entire story as a whole. It feels disjointed.

Each character is rich and deserves a voice but not all at once in this story. They should have their own line, their own history, rather than being wedged into this story that already has fifteen or so active characters. It makes it much more difficult to follow.

Otherwise, I find the story rich in detail and very cohescent considering how many different authors are working together to get it done. Good job.

The story was good, but i cant seem to find chapter 8!!!

Could someone tell me where to find it????

Whoever was supposed to write Ch. 8, and didn't, has screwed up the whole story!

A Tale as few others I have read on this site. I find it very interesting how so many Authors can keep a Tale rolling on the same story line. Please keep up the good work.....all of you.

Mahalo