Keep going with this story.. You have a good start on it..
I like the start, and even more the title that ends with Chapter1. Keep it up. It got me up.
Do keep going, slower buildups often make more entertaining stories
very nice build up cant wait to hear more, brings back some old memories
This was great...Gwen sounds like an angel.
Keep going, you're doing great!
I like the way this story is starting, can't wait to read the rest.
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Good start
Keep going with this story.. You have a good start on it..
good start
I like the start, and even more the title that ends with Chapter1. Keep it up. It got me up.
do continue
Do keep going, slower buildups often make more entertaining stories
Love it keep going
very nice build up cant wait to hear more, brings back some old memories
Great
This was great...Gwen sounds like an angel.
HOT start
Keep going, you're doing great!
a good start
I like the way this story is starting, can't wait to read the rest.
OH YEAH!
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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