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On a Plastic Bottle of Love

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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve07/18/07

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Fun read. Diet Love (with Sucrolove)is pretty amusing. But... none of this reads like a poem. Not one bit. :)

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by twelveoone07/19/07

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snake oil or some such stuff/but then alot reads like poetry here/but it isn't/

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by pmbluemoon07/21/07

*applause*

Capturing modern times with human finesse, good!

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