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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 17 years ago
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Some interesting stuff here. But it might be more interesting if you spent less time telling us about things and more time evoking things. Also perhaps tell us less.

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