A Night in the Park

Loved it

Hope to read more from you, mayb about how she became his slut

squirt squirt damn that was hot

Both disgusting and arousing. Nicely written.

OMG!

What a nasty, degrading, twisted story you have written here... and how wet it made me! So wet, in fact, that I had to leave my panties in the restroom of the cafe I was reading at, and drive home with my thighs soaked...

...and for that, I must give thanks! *wink*
~"Fuck Toy" Tori

excellent

I thought it was a great story. I hope to read more in the future.

great stuff

loved it, so damn good, coulda done with more screaming and dialogue but nevertheless, great stuff

VERY HOT

Almost makes me wish I was a homeless man too!! Great story!!

Gross

This is just plain gross.

Wonderfully arousing

Great story. It made me so wet!

Look forward to reading more of your work.

Great story, keep it up

Wonderfully erotic!

I have found that many men enjoy the thought of degrading thier wives sexually! Early in my marriage my own husband had done this to me, in later life I have returned the "favor" and have sexually decimated him....