wonderfully well written and narrated. I love the details of her thoughts as she is so exposed and taken. ...thinking I might need to take a trip to the library soon *grin* too bad I dont have a splendid Master like this
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Anonymous08/02/07
Wow.
I was left literally speechless by the time you finished that last word.
Amazing.
Absolutely amazing.
Right now, that had to probably be the best thing I've seen on this site yet.
Your tone and sound capture was practically perfect. The sheer sound of your voice is ideal for ears.
The way you read was enough to send me into a frenzy. Your description, and input, the personality, and extra "umph" really did the trick!
I didn't know whether to simply bask in your sonorous voice or to lay back and desirously play along.
That was indubitably a TRUE work of Literary Erotica!
Containing both literary elements at their best and the seduction and sultry enticements of eroticism.
And, nothing more can be said.
Thank you.
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Anonymous08/09/07
Wonderfully told
Wonderfully written and the voice of the author, greatly enhanced by his detailed thoughts of the 'librarian', drew me to a wonderful conclusion. Very well done indeed.
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Anonymous08/17/07
Outstanding!
Easily the best that I have come across in a long while. Great story, beautifully narrated.
I enjoyed this story and as always Zenmackie brought me right into the world. I was there at the local library with Patti. Hmmm I like the idea of the anonymous sex, the stranger's cum inside her panties, she feeling obligated to obey Master's orders and being rewarded for it. Love the short, but I want more!
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wonderful
wonderfully well written and narrated. I love the details of her thoughts as she is so exposed and taken. ...thinking I might need to take a trip to the library soon *grin* too bad I dont have a splendid Master like this
Wow.
I was left literally speechless by the time you finished that last word.
Amazing.
Absolutely amazing.
Right now, that had to probably be the best thing I've seen on this site yet.
Your tone and sound capture was practically perfect. The sheer sound of your voice is ideal for ears.
The way you read was enough to send me into a frenzy. Your description, and input, the personality, and extra "umph" really did the trick!
I didn't know whether to simply bask in your sonorous voice or to lay back and desirously play along.
That was indubitably a TRUE work of Literary Erotica!
Containing both literary elements at their best and the seduction and sultry enticements of eroticism.
And, nothing more can be said.
Thank you.
Wonderfully told
Wonderfully written and the voice of the author, greatly enhanced by his detailed thoughts of the 'librarian', drew me to a wonderful conclusion. Very well done indeed.
Outstanding!
Easily the best that I have come across in a long while. Great story, beautifully narrated.
I feel like going to library in no time...
Phew. A master making researches via library computer:) Hehe. I want him badly...
Excellent!
What a great story! I love both the story and your voice!! I'm looking forward to your other stories, and perhaps a visit to my own local library. ;)
Exceptional...
...the theme and the delivery!
Very sexy. The visuals I could see in my mind just from the writing were lovely. 5
Oh...Patti you are such a naughty girl
I enjoyed this story and as always Zenmackie brought me right into the world. I was there at the local library with Patti. Hmmm I like the idea of the anonymous sex, the stranger's cum inside her panties, she feeling obligated to obey Master's orders and being rewarded for it. Love the short, but I want more!
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