All Comments on 'Journey of a Cuckold Ch. 04'

I think I know what the "just" reason will be. But please don't keep us in suspense for too long!

Wonderful development of story so far. Can we look forward to some creampies?

A great effort indeed. I am an avid reader of erotic text on various sites & can surely vouch for the fact that this is one of the best piece on the theme of Indian Cuckold.Please comtinue.

The story gets better and better...you have a gift in narration...and you leverage the 'loving wives' theme so beautifully...hope you wont make the wait too long

Vyasya has created an amazing erotic fantasy. I wonder how this whole thing will be in the hands of an expert movie director!

Rohini mentioned on the Theatre evening on 30th May Sunday the day before Memorial day on 31St May 1999 that she and Shrini are only planning for a baby, and 3 months after the Movie incident Rohini is 5 months pregnant, how? She can at the most be 2 months at the time!

When Sameer says their sex life improved after the theatre incident what do he mean? It seems they are still using missionary position, and still Mayuri don't give him a complete deep throat blowjob which she does for Shrini. So what is the improvement? And once Mayuri fellates Shrini in the theatre in an open semi public place it will be impossible for her to resist Shrini's advances when they are alone during the horse riding. Shrini too after the episode will be constantly hitting her, it seems Rohini knows more than Sameer when she says something is happening between them. What is happening cannot be clearly understood as we are only having access to Sameer's perspective, it will be better if these details are clarified at a new series on Mayuri or Shrini's diary, which may either be discovered after their death or from Mayuri sharing details with Rohini or by accident!