All Comments on 'Trust Ch. 02'

I am always looking for feedback

Looking for feedback

Good One, but i think you should do a better description of sex scenes.

AN EX D.A. AND YOU FORGET THE LAW. TK U MLJ LV NV

THIS STORY HAS NO ENDING. AUTHOR DID NOT FINISH.

Too bad it is unfinished.

Now we have drama. One more chapter. What's going to happen? Hmmm...

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claim to be special forces type. probably a cook, or pvt's aide, or supply shelf puller.

those are all important mos's except for the ones who claim special forces vocations.

1 star

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another cocksucking WIMP posting dumb cuck SHIT.

We need to finish this.. Pretty good story.

Straight to hell.

😴Yawn..

Clearly there wasn't any trust to begin because if there was even a little bit, they wouldn't react like this. But you know, gotta have it this way for the purposes of the story, even if it's not realistic (unless the characters have been established to go off on one at the slightest thing).