Enemy Ch. 06

Absolutely Amazing!!!!

This story is fantastic!!! I am so happy your continueing it. I have been checking daily. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Keep up the good work. Your incredible :D

Please PLease Please

WOW WOW WOW I give ole girl a Handclap she stood up to her dad slap the shit out of him. Told everyone she was pregant. Love it. Her girls are the SHIT ride or die chicks. I think the Stones are gonna come around well momma stone is anyway. Noone is getting between her and her grandchild. once again you are the bomb.

so glad you're back

i've been waiting for the next installment of your story for so long! it's my fave on the site.. pleeeease don't let us wait months for the next one?

Yay

Im loving it. Cant wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!

thanks

want to thank you 4 giving us such a wonderful story

Fantastic, fantastic....

This story just gets better and better. I'm loving all the twists....cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work.

DAMN DAMN!!!!!!!!!

THIS STORY KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER PLEASE PLEASE KEEP IT COMING. FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!

FINALLY!!

yayayay, the story continues! You HAVE to come out with the next chapter soon!!!!! Also thank god Bianca finally got some back bone, I love that she's fighting for them now and is really coming into her own. You are an amazing writer, and I think you should write books!! Thank you!

YAY!!!!

please please PLEASEEEE write more soon! this is amazing and I don't know how long i can wait to find out what happens!

Awesome

I am so glad that she faught back... her and his family are f..img sick s..holes, my goodness to slap your own child because she is pregnant...great update and please post again soon. Thank you

Aweome

I'm really enjoying this story - I can't wait to see how it all ends up.

OMG HURRY UP WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!

that was an AWESOME STORY keep on writing ^-^

WoW

oh my you have such a way with the cliffhangers making us wait for more..such an amazing story I can't wait for more please write more soon..I want to find out how it ends...

beyond supper

OHHH my . loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! possst sooon

More More More!

More please! I have to know what happens!

YEAH!

More Please!!!

omg

omg i love your story its so amazing i cant wait to read the next chapter i hope its coming soon

OMG! MOOOOOREEEE PLEASE!

OMG really I need to know what happens next whooo! I love this story, please continue it.

oh please hurry with the next chapter!!

Oh i can't wait till the next one comes out, please hurry!!!!!!!!!!!

where are you

It's been over a month, don't think I can hang off this cliff any longer. What happens with Bianca and Diego? Diego's mother and poor tempest? Please update soon.

Please please finish this

I cannot wait for the conclusion of this most addicting saga. Dont keep them apart much longer. My eyes have been misty throughout the entire story. they have GOT to get together for that happy reunion!

hey

i reallly loved ure story....so far neway...lol....whats wid u and unfinished stories? neway doesnt matter just hurry up n finish it i soooooo cant wait.....AHHHH..ive visited this page like 50 billion times already...
waitin
luv, ure fan
xxx

waiting!

i've read this over & over can't wait to see how it ends!

the best story ever!

This whole serious is unbelievably beautiful! Please post soon!

Thanks for such a BEAUTIFUL story

This is one of the very best stories, I've read. I've enjoyed every chapter and cannot wait for the next. I understand that you are busy with other projects(YOUR MOVIE), but please contiune when you can!!!!!!!!!!

loved the story can't wait to see what happens next

Update

I really like this story and would like to see an update "SOON" i like check almost everyday, so plz if we can have an update soon i would be grateful

Excellent

This is an awesome story with wonderful characters. I am greatly looking forward to the next installment.

more please!

I cried through the whole chapter it was so great, but sad at the same time. I cant wait 4 the next chapter! Youre a great writer... keep up the great work!

tears!

omg i couldnt stop crying u have got to get a new chapter up please!!!!!!!!!

continue!!

I've been dying to find out how this ends!! C'mon!! Hurry with the next part please!!!

C'mon! Write faster!

Excellent! I love it! By far the best I've read in a long while on this site!

More Please!

I absolutely love this story! Please write another chapter, I'm dying to find out how their story ends!

good, but

its an awesome story, but the mood just keeps getting ruined with the grammar. i'm sorry, but i'm really partial to mistakes and all the uses of 'your' instead of 'you're' make me wince. and the mix up with blake and braxton, they keep switching places, it's confusing. sorry again, but please write a new chapter, the story is lovely

please

whens the next one comming PLEASE hurry up

AWESOME!!!!!!!

I LOVE this story!!! and anyone who is freaking complaining about it being a good story but the grammer takes away from the story is totally brain dead!! anyone hwho is anyone that reads your stories knows or will know that you are a VERy talented writer wether the grammer sucks or not!!!! i love it!! 100% FANTASTIC!!

O.M.G.

Freaking amazing...and to the douchebag that pointed out "your" and "you're" try reading some other literotica stories cuz that one little mistake is NOTHING compared to the shit out there on this website!! Good job on this one...you're an excellent writer. I can't wait to read your other submissions!

omg!!!

i mustve read this chapter a hundred times and im still sitting here crying!! Why does fate have to be so cruel?

OMFG!

This story is so fucking deep!! This crazy Romeo and Juliet type of story got ke bout to cry!

I agree with the comment below! This is a great story!

Still needs editing

But a great story, just the same.

Good

Fight for the love that you have for each other and it will prevail...

i'm addicted

i love this story so much,that i've read it four times already and i've cried each time i read it.what can i say,i'm addicted and love it

I am surprised his dick isn't rotten with all the random chicks he was banging and I don't know why she didn't tell him she was pregnant while they were alone in the labyrinth maybe things would've been different, maybe.. wishful thinking