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I thought
5 and 7 were excellent on their own.
The rest was interesting but didn't provoke any emotion, for me anyway.
Playful
clever and pleasing to the ear and eye. Good work. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.
^
Now this is more like it.
when
I read you, I know I am reading poetry that will be around, and discussed ina hundred years. Congrats, G.
You are my poetry idol...one of them, anyway, and there are only 5 so far. does that matter to you? I hope not.
keep up the intriguing work...
g_g
It's more a parody
than an original poem that uses Stevens's technique of numbering separate poems that together paint a picture of different views of the whole. Still, it's clever and funny, and a few of the strophes (cacophony/euphony one and the Plath one) are excellent and could stand very successfully on their own as uh poemlets. :-)
A bit more than half
a take on the thirteen, but nicely humorous and irreverant.
nicely done.
jth : )
IF THE WORDS ARE LOST
try humming or hambone. TK U MLJ LV NV
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