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Family Slave

byMzDeviancy©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/04/07

VERY KINKY

Very hot and very kinky,not really my cup of tea,prefer the more romantic softer approach to incest.However its not tea time is it.

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by funkyflashman09/04/07

LOVED IT!!!!

Please more!! Hope there are chapters to cum.

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by Anonymous09/05/07

Excellent

Hoping for more on this family.

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by RawHumor09/05/07

Okay, that was really hot!

You and I have similar tastes, I think.

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by Anonymous09/06/07

Really hot

This was a really hot story. Well written and imaginative. Would love to see some more installments, especially with the daughter having some more fun with mom. The sons too.

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by Anonymous09/07/07

Hot and kinky

Really great story, I had a hard-on throughout my reading of it. I assume there must be real families out there who enjoy sex together like this, probably sucking and fucking each other at this very minute, pity its so difficult finding them but then, of course, they probably want to keep their kinky perversions to themselves. When can we expect part two? I'd love to read more about this particular family.

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by Anonymous03/28/08

Not your best

Mutual humiliation or choice in humiliation. I would see more eroticism in that than the one that has been presented here.

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by Anonymous06/23/08

Yeeaahhh!

Loved it. And just 'cause I'm a guy that sometimes wants more than just sex doesn't mean I'm not a shallow whore.

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I love it! i was masturbating the whole time! I hope more chapters are cumming! Maybe with the mom getting screwed by both her sons at once and maybe with more humiliation?

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by Ldy_Sea02/17/10

Awesome

LOVE IT!!!! would love more adventures.

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by hedonis201108/11/11

I love how good you are describing the whole scenario. Your writing keeps me into the Story word by word.. Thank You for share your work

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by Anonymous10/18/11

prequel

I would love to read the breaking of mom and the introduction of the daughter to the scene

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by Anonymous03/22/13

Great story, please do more

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by rancoor08/18/13

Abominable

What a degenerate and barbaric brute..

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by sassysasha8909/05/13

Write more stories with Erin as her life as the family slave, please.

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by Anonymous05/21/14

SICK

Such flith can't believe I contaminated my mind reading this garbage

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by Anonymous06/27/14

Perverted? Yes Great Read? Absolutey

You really need to write another half dozen chapters. Great story but let her family spread mom's wings!

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by somewhatvanilla07/28/14

Hmmm..

This story deserves a prequel, how did we get to this?

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by Anonymous10/27/14

The Truth.

Believe Jesus Christ is your savior for your sins. Jesus Christ is God Almighty in the Flesh. This is the Gospel, believe Jesus Christ shed his precious blood and died for you and all of your sins on the cross, he was buried and he rose again from the dead three days later from God's Power and you will be saved, you are a Born Again Christian and you will go to Heaven forever. All have sinned and fallen short of the glory of God to where we all deserve death, destruction and judgement in the Lake of Fire from the wrath of God to where we need a savior to save us for our sins forever. By receiving Jesus Christ's blood sacrifice as full payment for your sins you will be saved forever. It matters not how much you have sinned in the past, in the present and in the future. Once you are saved you are saved forever no matter what. Good works will not ever save you and no one and nothing else will. That is the Gospel and if you believe in the Gospel you are now a Born Again Christian and you are now saved and you will go to Heaven forever and that is the whole truth. Spread the truth. All glory goes to God forever! Praise God! Amen! (John Ch. 3:16, Romans Ch. 3:25, 4:1-6, 5:9, 1 Corinthians Ch. 15:1-4, Ephesians Ch. 2:8-9) The Authorized King James Version Bible.

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by Anonymous11/24/14

that was worse/.....

this is complete garbage.......and the concept of family slave all went wrong!!

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by Anonymous12/12/14

slutty bitch

that was s fuckin hot i came on the spot and i was reading it at my friends boyfriends funeral they thought i was crazy anyway i need someone to fuck me like right now so if anyone wants to contact me my number is 0795659035

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by Anonymous08/04/15

Damn

You packed so much in so little words, keep up the good work

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by clippymustdie11/08/15

good story.

I liked all of this story, up till the daughter got involved.
Also needed more background info on why mom could not where close in the home.
Other than that, great job. thanks. v

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