The scene in the rain was well done. Nice way to wrap everything up.
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Anonymous09/18/07
i really like this
I really enjoyed this story. I am glad that it ended well, and i really liked the twists within I am not a writer myself, although i wish i could write like you, and some of the other good writers. Thanks for bringing us a story like this on this site, and i hope to read more of you soon :)
All my love, Abi x
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Anonymous07/08/09
Left me wanting more...
I loved the story, and have read every chapter. I find myself wondering if she got pregnant with Tom's kid, and if they got married. I wish this was not the end of this story.
My compliments on a well thought out piece of writing. You managed to convey the deep hurt and trauma of the act which motivated this young womans feelings. The insight shows that you have a deep understanding of the conflicting emotions that she experienced. I hope that sharing these insights helps both you and others to understand the result of a despicable act. Well done, kind regards and continue to develop your talent. M
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Good Story!!
The scene in the rain was well done. Nice way to wrap everything up.
i really like this
I really enjoyed this story. I am glad that it ended well, and i really liked the twists within I am not a writer myself, although i wish i could write like you, and some of the other good writers. Thanks for bringing us a story like this on this site, and i hope to read more of you soon :)
All my love, Abi x
Left me wanting more...
I loved the story, and have read every chapter. I find myself wondering if she got pregnant with Tom's kid, and if they got married. I wish this was not the end of this story.
Very Good !!
My compliments on a well thought out piece of writing. You managed to convey the deep hurt and trauma of the act which motivated this young womans feelings. The insight shows that you have a deep understanding of the conflicting emotions that she experienced. I hope that sharing these insights helps both you and others to understand the result of a despicable act. Well done, kind regards and continue to develop your talent. M
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