I'll have another serving of J&K if you wouldn't mind ;)
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Anonymous08/02/07
HOT & to the TOP OF FVS ... MORE PLEASE!!!!
I loved how it starts out lovely and heats up all the way through....the couple sounds almost identical to my wife and I.
I can't wait to read more and see if they adopt her.
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Anonymous02/09/08
Get Real!
42DDs on a petite college student?! Come on, the ridiculousness of that is a turn off, even in fantasy. Make them 38D and you'll be on the border of reality.
Next chapter, Molly visits their home, then the newly married couple. If it hits you to add more cool, but I can see how this too was a good ending for a short rub it jerk it story.
But as I add to most authors, some of us like women with smaller breasts or average.
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more please
I'll have another serving of J&K if you wouldn't mind ;)
HOT & to the TOP OF FVS ... MORE PLEASE!!!!
I loved how it starts out lovely and heats up all the way through....the couple sounds almost identical to my wife and I.
I can't wait to read more and see if they adopt her.
Get Real!
42DDs on a petite college student?! Come on, the ridiculousness of that is a turn off, even in fantasy. Make them 38D and you'll be on the border of reality.
all that tit and not a mention
Good and more potential
Next chapter, Molly visits their home, then the newly married couple. If it hits you to add more cool, but I can see how this too was a good ending for a short rub it jerk it story.
But as I add to most authors, some of us like women with smaller breasts or average.
This one follows the plan. . .
Every girl has bigger-than-life tits, and every boy has an enormous cock.
Story line is not believable either.
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