All Comments on 'Crossing the Line Ch. 02'

You have chosen an excellent story line and I enjoyed how you are developing the main characters.

Please don't spoil a good thing by injecting any thing lika a "Super Black Dick!"

John

brilliant writing

Thanks a ton for sending me the feedback.

And please do so when you write again.

Either this series - or another.

I know that I'm a little late to this one...but these stories were incredibly erotic, and they actually portrayed what I would call a man's true emotions and intentions. I love the way that he has been slowly drawn into the situation, from fantasizing to flirting, step by step. The scenario is both erotic and believable!

If you find some free time, please finish this one up!