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by RhymeFairy07/29/07

I give,

you take ... Life my friend, takes and gives. A hard lesson learned and even harder to swallow.

I love your imagery and presence in this poem. Perhaps reread, breath and listen to yourself, telling what .. is. Keep at it, never give in. Eventually, life rolls around again ~

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