All Comments on 'ugly'

Good poem. I like the parts about beating you into tears and ripping out hair. Actually, the overall look of the poem is rather ugly, which fits perfectly. I guess an illustration of a orgasmic butterfly wouldn't have worked. ;)

Taking those words with that illustration makes for an interesting result. Hard edged honesty.

This illustrated expresses the mood of the words nicely. Very good work as per usual.

the reader with a pointed vision of man's illusive world ...ty blue

and lack of self. TK U MLJ LV NV