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by WickedEve08/07/07

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Good poem. I like the parts about beating you into tears and ripping out hair. Actually, the overall look of the poem is rather ugly, which fits perfectly. I guess an illustration of a orgasmic butterfly wouldn't have worked. ;)

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by LeBroz08/07/07

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Taking those words with that illustration makes for an interesting result. Hard edged honesty.

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by 08/09/07

Un-ugly

This illustrated expresses the mood of the words nicely. Very good work as per usual.

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by bluerains08/10/07

you leave

the reader with a pointed vision of man's illusive world ...ty blue

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by tazz31704/16/12

WHAT CAUSES MY DOWNFALL

and lack of self. TK U MLJ LV NV

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