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A Slave's Story Ch. 04

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by Anonymous12/25/08

? Mindgames

I dont like having my time wasted. Why you made such a farce out of a reasonable story only you know. If as you claim you have written an ending lets see it. The so called dual format could have worked if they were different rather than rehashed. If you did not finish this at least be honest and either remove it or label it. The first part may stand alone, the rest is pointless without a conclusion. -- UK CYNIC.

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