Love how you seem to have an incredibly large thesaurus for sex, really adds spice to the series. The prior poster did have a point though, we have only assumed that they are on birth control, not any confirmation of the fact, or pregnancies, or even a hint of the whole thing being shit canned.
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Anonymous09/09/08
Next chapter
The next one is Tori.
by
Anonymous11/01/08
Great Story!!
Ahhhh if only I had Jason's stamina. A very good read even if it goes a bit beyond believable. Your writing is good and easy to read. I think I would like more detail of the actual love making. As the girls take Jason in their mouth, how does it feel??, Does he have a foreskin?? How big is he. As he takes the girls how are they each shaved??? How pink are they inside??? I will keep you in my favorites until I read everything you wrote.
English
This is one of my favorite series.
Who gets knocked up first?
good stuff
Love how you seem to have an incredibly large thesaurus for sex, really adds spice to the series. The prior poster did have a point though, we have only assumed that they are on birth control, not any confirmation of the fact, or pregnancies, or even a hint of the whole thing being shit canned.
Next chapter
The next one is Tori.
Great Story!!
Ahhhh if only I had Jason's stamina. A very good read even if it goes a bit beyond believable. Your writing is good and easy to read. I think I would like more detail of the actual love making. As the girls take Jason in their mouth, how does it feel??, Does he have a foreskin?? How big is he. As he takes the girls how are they each shaved??? How pink are they inside??? I will keep you in my favorites until I read everything you wrote.
Very Good
I'm not sure why you stopped but you have a Winner.
You might want to enter the Valentines Contest?
real niceeeeee...........
Keep going, it just gets better and better.
more
you are doing great so more of this story please
Very well done...
The only reason you got 5 stars is bcause it did not go to 10. Keep up the good work!
*****
Cute, humorous, sexy and well written. Thank you. Cheers!
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