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A Knight's Tale
I'm really getting to like the character of John. Simple but crafty, with a noble soul to outmatch his new station. Loved the hints and clues Grams offered, adding more intrigue to the story. Well done, DL.
Great work. . .
I'm really happy with how John's life is being flushed out and we're learning more about him. Great addition to the chain. :)
Great work. . .
I'm really happy with how John's life is being flushed out and we're learning more about him. Great addition to the chain. :)
YAY!
I, Too, am glad to get to know John. Grams is cool.
It's a great addition to the chain!
great as always
You do such a good job with character development, adding little things in the crack and this is no different.
Excellent!
John is a wonderful, multi-faceted character that really jumps off the page, and Grams just joined those ranks in this story. I absolutely love her, and I hope we get to see her again. The looks into society's prejudice are also well done and really add atmosphere.
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