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Twilight Temptations

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by Anonymous

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by 07/30/07

I like this one.

It's a vivid example of erotica without being vulgar or boring. I think it has good balance.

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by GuiltyPleasure08/04/07

Your title....

....promises something less than you deliver but I'm glad I persevered. Well worth reading, thank you and welcome to our community.

Tess

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by Anonymous04/16/09

A very good description, in a good venue

This one, I liked. It seemed to flow and had a chain of thought.

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by corndog_10/05/10

Excellent

"A tumble of pillows ago..." ? Brilliant!

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