All Comments on 'Twilight Temptations'

by avasogently

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I like this one.

It's a vivid example of erotica without being vulgar or boring. I think it has good balance.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 16 years ago
Your title....

....promises something less than you deliver but I'm glad I persevered. Well worth reading, thank you and welcome to our community.

Tess

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A very good description, in a good venue

This one, I liked. It seemed to flow and had a chain of thought.

corndog_corndog_over 13 years ago
Excellent

"A tumble of pillows ago..." ? Brilliant!

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