by Katexx
Could you please tell me what's so idiotic? It's just, this is my first try at writing on a website and I'd like to improve. :)
this isnt bad for the first time but the whole 11 inch cock thing is unnecesary and frankly a little silly. a womens vaginal canal can not handle an 11 inch cock and sex would be VERY painful. Keep writing but dont focus so much on the size of his cock