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Off to a good start
It's too early to say much about it, aside from the fact that it's legible and properly spelled. But I do want to see more of this story. :)
:-)
a completely delightful story :-D
I like it!
A good start to a fantasy that sounds similar to ones I have dreamt myself. Good dialogue.
Mmmmm...
This has the makins of a sweet little story
and if I'm right, I'm going to hate to see it
come to an end.
Allot of potential!
The general feel of the story thus far is wonderful. Please dont stop!
Delightful, but flawed
You need to get this edited. The bugs are little things, mainly homophones and punctuation issues, but they're distracting. If it lives up to its initial promise (I'm going to keep reading) the story deserves a bit of TLC. ;)
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