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Death of a Parasite

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by beautyandwine07/29/07

You describe

...such an endearing scene. I enjoyed, thank you for sharing.

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by sack08/10/07

lovely

Kind of like a miniature mystery, I had no idea what he was doing at first. An unusual idea, treated well.

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