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A Unicorn's Love Ch. 02.1

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by trippychick08/05/07

yay

YAY! *happydance* I'm so glad you wrote more, thanks for letting me know about them before hand. They were awesome:) Can't wait for more

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by Anonymous08/28/07

Nice!

Very good conclusion.. though I wouldn't mind if there was more!

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by Shayaniel12/18/07

Liked it a lot!

Very nice one, you carry a beautiful silent yet very intense tone when telling your stories which have a certain enthralling way about them!

Keep on writing, you sure have the talent for it!

Cheers
-Shaya

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by countrygirlfla09/11/12

Short and sweet

A nice SHORT STORY and sweet.It would have been nice to have more chapters,background info on why she ran from her home,and the aftermath of his explaining who and what he was and the eventual outcome of their mating,but for what is was,it was a good quick read.

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