All Comments on 'A Unicorn's Love Ch. 02.1'

YAY! *happydance* I'm so glad you wrote more, thanks for letting me know about them before hand. They were awesome:) Can't wait for more

Very good conclusion.. though I wouldn't mind if there was more!

Very nice one, you carry a beautiful silent yet very intense tone when telling your stories which have a certain enthralling way about them!

Keep on writing, you sure have the talent for it!

Cheers

-Shaya

A nice SHORT STORY and sweet.It would have been nice to have more chapters,background info on why she ran from her home,and the aftermath of his explaining who and what he was and the eventual outcome of their mating,but for what is was,it was a good quick read.

Yes I like the story, built slowly and gave entertainment... Are you going to add more chapters? Why was she running? What happened to her kingdom? Will he turn back into his unicorn form? Will they have a family? I just wondered will they get their happily ever after?