All Comments on 'Back to Bristol Ch. 18'

How interesting that Peter Fucking Davies is fighting so hard to keep his sham marriage; particularly when compared to how meekly Chris let his slip away. Thanks for the ride, Gary.

But will it satisfy Jamie?? Odd that Chris changed his mind in a hurry when Molly became angry.. Maybe Molly just needs to give him hell whenever he starts in on her!! SO, now it would seem that Peter is going to do something drastic.. Something similar to kidnapping?? Who knows..

immoral, it is all over but the shouting, more or less! At

least in Molly's way of looking at things. She does seem, at

least to me, hung up on sex!

Another fine chapter! Great Gary. Thanks.

Bruce

peter and the mother will try to come between them,but chris will tell her the truth and they will make it alright.they will move to america and live happy ever after.unless molly fucked peter while he in america,rhen it over.

Please let it go... 18 parts in enough

Character development has been superb. I feel like I know all the players. It dawned on me that I am going to miss them when the story is finished. I can't think of any greater praise for a writer than that.

Also, did you have any luck selling it as a screen play?

How mindless !

Your disbelief must be suspended so low that it matches your IQ !!!

Probably because that's where all the asylums for criminally insane are !!

"1*" !

Congrats. Good chapter. Four out of five. I was delighted when Christ and molly got together. I can't lie. I liked how the author did it when they both blew up at each other. They needed that honesty to bring them together. I like the vacation together and Chris's talk with his son was emotionally powerful. And I think I see the last big challenge coming. Peter and Susan have had Chris followed to Hawaii and they have picture of him with Myra which they are going to misrepresent to Molly. can they survive one last storm? Cheers Steve

Love the tour of scotches, oh and the story is great too

tl;dr: psychobabble, blame shifting, coombrain it's all good for Chris!

Got his head out of his ass