All Comments on 'The Princess and the Pea'

by MagicaPractica

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TrombonusTrombonusover 16 years ago
Hot stuff!

What a great twist on an old fairy tale!

BBWLOVER56BBWLOVER56over 16 years ago
Lovely Rewrite

My Dear, you have done a lovely rewrite of an old fable that has in my memory, been lost. Please share more of your rewrites here at Lit. I welcome your submissions.

NotJammiesNotJammiesover 16 years ago
Perfect retelling!

Plausible, real, romantic and hot. I love it!

Jammies

*runs off with scissors*

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Amazing

Have you been keeping these hot stories in reserve for an all out assualt on our gonads,if so you have won .I give in and am going to take a rest in a shaded room.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
amused

i never guessed the importance of pea until the last sentence. nice, creative piece.

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12about 13 years ago
hehee*****

Like the other comment said, I had no idea what the pea ever had to do with the princess...thanks for explaining that! Good story!

DreamCloudDreamCloudalmost 9 years ago
Nicely Done

Enchanting and, above all, fun!

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