I liked the way the story built up and how both characters wound each other up. I'm not a big fan of the gay fantasy though. I'd have expected that in another category, or at least some kind of warning.
So I can't give it the 5/5 this story deserves, but the description of the sex was good, keep it up!
Nice buildup, no fan of the gay fantasy
I liked the way the story built up and how both characters wound each other up. I'm not a big fan of the gay fantasy though. I'd have expected that in another category, or at least some kind of warning.
So I can't give it the 5/5 this story deserves, but the description of the sex was good, keep it up!
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