Controlling Cop

Very Erotic

Very erotic story! You write very well. The only thing is that it ended too quickly. I was hoping for more. Keep up the great work!

i agree

your story had me at the title. i always had a thing for cops. the ending was a bit abrupt; however, i was hopeing for more. then again, always leave them wanting more? sg

Burning Hot..domination,roughlust,shades of incest

Powerful literotic writing , raw animalistic lust unleashed..and like most Magica's stories ,the location itself adds to the heat of everything...see the matching between the darkness of the kitchen where they meet and the darkness of the desires they have!

Needs a sequel!

Here's a story that just demands a sequel. I would love to see the stories of everything that's touched on in the last couple of paragraphs.

This story was really hot, but it totally left me wanting more!

OMG

Your story... wow. Your story made me cum so hard. I've never left a comment here ever before. Please write more like this one.

wow

this story wasn't overly long,but it sure packed the heat.you made excellent word choices,getting your story out with minimal fuss. i usually need many more detail,but not with this fastpaced,erotic read.job well done.as everyone else has said"more please".thanks MP.

More!!

I would love to read more about the handcuffs and spanking! The handcuffs would really add to the fact that he's a cop, and maybe add more in about the friend and possibly have her walk in on them?
~Alexandra

Mmm loved it! Thank you