Cabin Fun

It wasn't all that well written but I gave it top

marks because 1-A new plot, 2--No over sized dick, 3-No over sized boobs--Just good clean sibling fun--Who can ask for more

Is There More?

I love Marilyn's work and share her opinions of your story. I think the story could be expanded. You left that door open...so, give us the sequel.

So so

Not the best story I've read but not bad. More character development would be good. I found Ashley acted immature for her age which made it creepy and of course the moment I read the first paragraph with the girl being 18 and the guy being 19 I rolled my eyes - this seems to be the norm in ALL brother/sister incest stories.

Hope there's more to come

I wish I had a sister that would do things like that with me. I hope there is more to come with him taking his mother through the thicket.

wow

That was amazing and the most creative way to have them hook up.

cummin

i came all over my bed

Sounds like an excellent lead in to more. Love it.

Like it!

Nicely written. I look forward to more.

nice

it not bad mate but wouldnt be a bad idea to use more descriptive and more convo while they have sex, just sayin

Short but great

It was a great story and could be the beginnings of an amazing story arc please write more in this series!!

Short but fun!! Thanks :)

details

It was a good scenario, but i thought it was lacking in details and in the description of the sex. There is no build up, the characters just cum instantly a bunch of times.