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With out a doubt

Jerry, let's make another baby. I want to mate with you and give you a son."
That is the cheesiest line I have ever read in any story. What are they monkeys?
Are you and Winterfrog both on crack these days?

Sheeesh!

dg you rock

dg dont listen to the anon assholes like thaT last one this site has a shitload of them /all complaints and no sense/ALL YOU ANONYMOUS FREAKS IF YOU CAN CAN WRITE BETTER DO SO LEAVE THE GOOD ONE LIKE DG WINTERFROG JAKE AND OTHERS ALONE UNLESS YOU CAN DO BETTER/thankyou dg for a good read i appreciate your work

Loved It

Thoroughly enjoyable story. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. If they are up to the standard of this one, I am in for a treat. On of the best stories of this type.

I didn't ENJOY it

The murder-suicide part of the story kept me from enjoying the story, but it was an excellent tale, well conceived and well written. And, yes, sometimes people use cheesy lines. Not all of us are as articulate as we would like, and many times we find that poor jokes work well when lots love is involved.

ladies and gentlemen welcome to the real world

everything that this story has is real life.so if you don't like the story,go back in your monkey hole with your candy ass.wimpy and giving your wife away isn't this writer way,that i think is causing the bad comments.he did the right thing in this story and the real life snuff comes with the world.i think the man who killed the people should've killed the lover in his bedroom while he was fucking the wife.that would put fear in a lot of assholes out there who like other men wives.great story.

Damn DG! Great story

I can't figure out why a story this good doesn't have an H behind it. What is the matter with these readers. Your stories have it all, sex, mystery and love. Please keep writing. You are only one it a handful of authors I care to read anymore.
Roger

Author, DG Hear

I write my stories with emotions and feelings. If I get emotional about a story I hope my readers do to. I realize we don't all like the same thing in stories, I give you the best I got. Sorry for those that feel that it isn't enough.

Many times I use real instances and circumstances that I come across in life or even on the tube. Thank you all for reading and commenting on my stories. (even the negative ones) That's the only reward we writers receive.
Thanks again
Dg Hear

Sad story; a very good romance

I agree with the one comment about the murder-suicide: that kind of thing unfortunately happens all too often IRL and it is sad to consider it happening. Otherwise, I liked this story - good example of what happens when people stop communicating with each other.

WONDERFUL

Absolutely wonderful...what else is there to say?!?

Communication, communication, commmunication!

It will kill any marriage or make any marriage depending on whether it's done right or not.

You did a great job of bringing this out in this story.

Regards, Jack

great, as usual

I don't know if this is your best story or not; you've got so many good ones that it's a tough call. But this is certainly right up there, a tale truly up to your very high standards. Perfectly paced, with real 3-dimensional characters and a very sobering slice of real life. Kudos!

One of the best ....

Thanks for a story with meaning and purpose other than just writing a wank story. Well done.

Very good story of love

A wonderful ending except for John.. Gotta admit, it looked like she was getting ready to have too much fun.. And, I guess she was, really!!

well done

An interesting story about how important it is to keep the lines of communication open. Good stuff, DG.

Thanks!!

Thanks DG for yet another exceptionally well-written story, a tale truly up to your very high standards. I must say that it looked like she was mentally prepared to have a little fun on the side and who could blame her? Keep writing. You are one of only a handful of authors I really care to read anymore. Pete.

A wonderful story from DG that will entertain

A good story DG with a nice feel of trusting each other just enough. One finally sits down and asks their partner what the hell is up with you, as here is my baggage right now what’s under your skin. Please tell me what we are doing to get this damn wall between us smashed wide open. Nice way of not going overboard with a plot but a using a simple occurrence that can grow into a volcano from a steam hole in a hurry if left to fester and no one sees it coming.Thanks for the entertainmentPT

Dg

I finally read this story. Don't know why I kept passing it up but I needed it today. I am tired about reading about slut wives that cheat although I know that they exist. I am tired of so called writers making the husband a dunce just to stretch out a thin story. marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

Great writer- irritating story

I have never read a bad DG Hear story. You have a real talent for making even a mediocre story read well. In this story though ,I disliked your hero, who came across as a control freak. Having witnessed a terrible tragedy he got upset which understandable. But instead of explaining why he was so moody to his wife he spent 6 months making her life miserable with his paranoid suspicions until he finally decided to discuss his problem with her. He's lucky his wife hadn't left him by that time especially with stupid stunts like sending flowers with anonymous signature.
Sorry ,you're I fine writer , but your hero ,to me was an arrogant ass-hole.
the Ct. Yankee

Your story suks big time.

Nope, nope and nope again. No puta goes to all that trouble just to tease her hubby, never ever. She does it for another man and that's it cause that's sabalutely 100%ly truth bout all putas. S o o o - this story is completely false and has zero merit.

What a superb story!!!

One of the best I ever read by Master of the pen with such a deep perception of human nature and emotions. Well done!!

Very Fine Story

I have to admit that the hero was a bit slow about getting around to the heart to heart, and did not let us in on many details like his refusing to go out on Fridays, but luckily his wife really loved him though it is a good thing that he got his act together when he did!

One of the best !

Really outstanding - human, real, tear jerker, suspense and some real expression of love and fear.

Very well written and fun to read - well paced and the finish was perfect as well.

I had actual anxiety about her intentions and the potential and was looking for you to get the tow of them fixed before something stupid even more happened LOL

Thanks for a great read

A sad but uplifting story....

It much be unimaginatively stressful for any policeman to come upon a scene with dead children. I can understand why this would be somethng that he might not be able to share with his wife. You did a masterful job of describeing his pain and how his lack of communication could almost cost him his marriage. I wonder if many of the police divorces are partially a result of this stress.

BRAVO,,,,DG Hear

Another hit, a true loving wife story. You restored my faith in loving wives, I mean true loving wives. Not a slut and a wimp husband but a wife and husband that are realy in love. Thank you.

Good Story

I'm so glad you had them come to their senses before one or the other cheated. And thanks for again pointing out how lack of communication is the root of many marital problems.

Great

Your story says it all, communication is the life line in a marriage

Lesson learned -

A common theme in your stories and I like it a lot -

Nicely done -

Thank you

dragner

was a half hour show.

DG, it was a good story BUT...

...it was depressing to me. Melancholy about the poor man that killed his wife's lover, his wife and his children. I would have killed the wife and her lover but I would have tried to do it in a way that I would still be around to care for the children. It would be a tough decision. I have been depressed but never in a fugue state as he seems to have been. No wonder the cop was "down" for six months but he should have communicate with his wife about it and she should have forced him to talk with her. Thank you for writing.

I GUESS THOSE "DARE" SCHOOL PROGRAMS

bear fruit in our later life, TK U MLJ LV NV

Kind of Sad

It was a good story about a marriage that was not damaged by infidelity but about that husband who murdered his wife, her lover and their children it was depressing. That should be a tale all by itself. Well written as usual.

Morose and dim story about crazy love gone bad and cheaters.

I didn't like the story but I rated it 5* because it was well written. The story explains life's complexity as it relates to love marriage and infidelity. People can react irrationally in the midst of betrayal.

cops

there is a high rate of divorce in law enforcement. with the split shifts
and the pressure of the job. add to that is the normal stress that comes up
in a marriage . a lot of cops have a huge ego problem. your tale had a
little insight into the cops world.

An outstanding story, five stars.

what a great story

This has to be one of if not the best story I have ever read on this site. A real loving wife. I can feel the pain of the cop in this story. The human interaction is superbly depicted in this tale. Well Done. I shall look forward to your other stories in the future.
Rob A london England

Ridiculous

She starts dressing sexier "For her husband", yet only wears them to work, when hubby isn't around? Coincidentally when the new guy starts working there! She organizes a couples weekend, without her husband, knowing the guy that she is being sexually pursued by will be her date for the night. She goes out and buys sexy underwear for that night along with revealing dresses, hiding them from hubby, all the time lying to him. And when he begs her to stay with her family, she gets angry, because she might miss her weekend away with her 'friend'. The only reason she decided to not go, was because of some thinly veiled threats from her husband! He may as well have said; "If you cheat, I'll kill us both and the kids too, just like that case I worked on!"
She sees her husband struggling emotionally after a case, which he told her about that first night, and what does she do to help? Nothing. All she sees is an opportunity to cheat.
Not a marriage worth saving, even in fiction!

Kroisis...

you're paranoid. Sometimes an ink blot is just an ink blot. You can take good and decent people's statements at their face value. You've either been reading too many cheating wife stories, or you hang around the wrong kind of people. Maybe the "666" is a clue that I'm right about the kind of folks you run with. Open the door, go outside and experience life...with good, kind, real humans for a change. Leave your demons behind. Happiness is found within...it really is your choice.

Umm anonymous...

You just did the exact same thing. You attacked him without commenting on the story. Pot...Kettle...

Anon 05/17/15

Paranoid? Me? Who told that? Was it THEM? It was, wasn't it? I knew it! Why are they watching me? WHY? I knew that fly fell onto my soup on purpose. Spying on me. What are YOU looking at? You're with them, aren't you! Stay away......STAY AWAY FROM MEEEEE!

What did I say last time? I didn't even bother to read it. Enjoyed the story this time round though. Speaking of paranoia, it can happen to any one, just look at our cop friend in this one! He should have told her he was struggling with what he saw at work. She should have told him that she felt him pulling away.
Whatever my last comment was, it was probably left when I had already read a different story that pissed me off, which left me in a bad mood, so I probably unfairly left shitty comments on a lot of stories that day. At least, that's what usually happens. Bear with me, I'm learning to chill these days!

By the way

666 is just a number. Same as 13 isn't really unlucky. Nor is walking under ladders bad luck. Put the bible down, judgey, and quit thumping it! If you are the type of person that judges others by how they look, or who they talk to, then perhaps YOU should follow your own advice, my friend, and get out more!
Like I said, I'm LEARNING to chill. Not totally there yet!

Ha ha ha

I just read a few other comments!
That whole 'You attacked the guy below', followed by another 'You did the same!', followed by another..........
That could go on forever! One comment laid upon another, upon another... Well, you get my drift. Only way to stop the cycle is to put a nice comment in between! So.....
I LOVE YOU GUYS !!!!!! HUGS ALL ROUND;)

Seeking rationality in a literary mode...

Five stars. Not for great literary achievement. Literary product is always in a state of becoming, and you just might find that you have "arrived" one day. No. I hit the "fiver" because you go against the grain. You take a risk when you maintain a modicum of optimism in the current state of existence. I credit you just for being willing to devote time to searching your creative genius for a sustainable endurance while witnessing a great culture under incredible force of bitter assault. Thanks. S.L.H

I truly enjoyed

Great story. Straight to the point. I truly enojyed it

Good story

But the line "I want to mate with you and give you a son" just seemed so stupid. No one talks like that in real life. No one. Ever.

YEP....ANOTHER GOOD STORY

but what I cannot understand is why was he not offered counseling after witnessing such brutal murders...would have saved all the angst and heartache....anyone involved in such crimes is offered counseling as a matter of principle....glad they sorted the problems out and Matt knew to back off or else...nice tale....

Well, if you say she wasn't cheating,

it's your story and we have to accept that. But, you didn't say she wasn't cheating, you wrote that "she" said she wasn't and hadn't cheated. I agree with the post that said she was just a few degrees off on her story about the clothes and going to another town for a dance night out. It looked like she had some shenanigans in mind and seemed like she was courting the new guy at work, with the blessing of all of her friends at work and even one of their husbands. When it looked like hubby had clued into her plans and would probably divorce her and hurt her a lot she decided to go with plan B, lie to the poor bastard. Now that I have said that some annony can call me paranoid and reaching and all that. And that might be true. Hooty-hoo.

Addendum: If John

was here in Texas he could really be happy. Good for us, we have an express lane for our killers, no lines, no waiting.