A Cat Among Wolves Ch. 05

OHHHHHHHH Noooooooooo

I have been confused all my life now you have made it terminal :) I will never be able to figure which Kitty answers when i shyout Cat . great stories.

is it over????

is the story over already?? i love the story i just hope you will give an ending that gives closure to the story.

oh please......

I hope the story isn't over. I really love the cat and wolf stories you have been writing. i would love to read more. PLEASE!!!!!!!!

NO WAY!

The End? as in THE END? as in FIN? FINISH? DONE?

NO MORE?

NO WAY! O.O You HAVE to write more about them... O.O

GREAT!!!!

Great Storyline!!!! I just hope it isn't over with as its too good a story to give up so quickly. Just please keep Vampires out of it as we all know when Vamps & Weres are in a story, then the Vamp is automatically the main story. Hope you add to it soon. =)

Wow!

This is great! I'm sad that you're not continuing. What about Finn and Jess? ^_^ *begs for more*

Damn good

were-tiger/wolf babies?

LOL.

so after i finished with this story. I was thinking well this story cant just end like this....and why is it that everytime they do it, he uses a condom?

Is her scared of having tiger/wolf babies? i think that'd be kinda cool. it'd look something like a wolf with stripes, mind reading abilities and shifting abilities...

maybe you can save that for jess and finn. perhaps they get intimate and jess ends up pregnant, but even so.. she refuses to become finn's mate... or what not..

eh. you've gotten me piqued. cant wait to see what happens next.

Loved It!

The only thing I didn't like was that it ended too soon. Please, please, please write more!

Cheers...and a JEER!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS SOOOO GOOOD!!!

BUT WHY IS IT OVER????!!!! WTF, MATE????!!!!

More!!!!!!! More!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thise is a whonderfell story!!! But,this feels like only the begining so please Do Not Stop!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bulding the tension between lovers

I read the story in a few days, and I absolutely loved it!I lvoed how you didn't jump into the sex on the first chapter and built up the tension between the two protagonists. The story is gripping and the action is very detailed. The final chapter reminds me a lot of how I write, or at least how I'd like to write. Anywho, awesome job on this love!

Worth paying for!

If this had been a short story in the book store I definitely would have paid for it :)

It may be wise to continue

Why not keep it going? Great potential and eventually, could be discovered by someone special. The ending however, is dreadful.

You're freakin awesome kitten!

You've really got me hooked onto this li'l series! Excellent work.

More, more, more!

Super story! Great plot but what about the golden globe? Too little sex scenes for my taste and with such a talent for descriptions you should make them longer!!! Totally agree about the wolf-tiger babies - what's with the 'safe sex'? What about if they were to make love mid-shift?? Brilliant story with some potential for Finn - bless! Well done!

I loved it!!

Please tell me your not done yet. That can not be all to this story I would love to know what happens with that globe. And the woman that man wanted to free. Please keep it going!!!

Wonderful!!

I absolutely loved this series. Wonderful story telling.

That was fantastic

That was amazing. What happened to the globe though? Loved the characters, totally suggest writing a sequal

Love It!!

I really liked the story, you should make more! Oh, maybe think of a story where they are both "changed"! xD

loved it!!

write more!! lol will sabeen get pregnant? i bet their babies wil look cute

please,pleas a thousand million times write more

i love the story, all of it, and yeah i agree with the others, you should write what happens when they " do it" changed. write more. whatever happens to theo and his bitch, though?

Great story

I really enjoyed your story. Just had to keep reading. It was really wonderful.

Excellent work.

As an author myself, your story was incredibly well thought out. I will say that the globe should be embellished upon, and possibly an explanation on the ghost man and his background. All in all, your story was an excellent read. Kudos.

Wonderful

I would very much like to see much more of this story. I agree with the rest of your comments. Please say there is more somewhere.

Great Story!

I totally loved it, It read just like my favourite short stories :D Hope to read more of your work in future

Superbly exhilarating and enticingly naughty

You are an amazing writer and it'll be great if you could write a book on it. These short stories gave me goosebumps and some ideas for my hubby and I, truly enjoyed this.

More,

I hope this is not the end????

That was an awesome series. Thanks for writing it! Well-developed characters, great plot. I really enjoyed it.

:(

loved this story so much and really think you could develop it into a whole huge story!! and i wont mind taking on the job of reading it all :D

Very cool. Liked this one a lot

WOW

I thing you should think about submitting some of your stories to ellora's cave. you could so get payed to write.

great one

so well done..but surely there could be more?

One of the few good ones on here! Great read! Thank you!

amazing

thank you kitten101! this story warmed my heart and had me laughing till the end. you have an amazing talent! i would pay big bucks to read a story that was guaranteed to be as good as this one. THank you for being the amazing author you are!!

Hoping

I hope that you will be adding more to this story. I would like to know what happen with Sabeen and her new family.

fingers crossed!

I realy hope you make a chapter six! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Wowser

Well, I have'ta admit, it is.. TOTALY AWSOME I LOVE IT SO WHY IN THE HELL ISN'T THERE ANOTHER CHAPTER YET???!!!! there, that about covers it...

please

i love this story. i hope you will keep writing on it

GREAT !!

I really loved this one and am praying for more chapters. Please, please, please continue the story!

loved it!!!!

an amazing series.....

thank you and keep the stories comin ;D

Funny in the extreme

So far, this series has had me giggling like an idiot, as my wife will attest hehe

Beautiful

Ending here.

So great!

Loved it! I have read it more than once and probably will again in the future. Keep up the great writing.

Great Story

Second time trough and still a good read thanks

Keep them coming

Wow just finished reading all the series here and love them all. All I can say is MORE MORE MORE!!

A couple hours of distracted reading at work.....

And it shouldn't end here. Of course I'm going to favorite the story and then check for other submissions. But I have totally fallen for the characters.

I literally am a book nerd. I mark down release dates so I can buy the next addition of a series as soon as possible. I love story series and the good ones become addictive. With that being said..

I want to know what Aaron is! Theo, Ange, and the remaining pack have to be wrapped up. Royce.... Oh boy, that storyline could be insane! The counsel, that's just a huge ominous mess that needs to be addressed and of course we all want to know more about the Hunter Investigations crew.

I thank you for this story and implore you to contine with it alongside all of the commentators who posted before me.