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by Anonymous

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by wildsweetone07/30/07

poetry forum

i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating i've given you is so that it does not affect future temp ratings. - wildsweetone.

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by GuiltyPleasure07/31/07

Wicked -

- and sly. I found myself smiling as I read this one. I like it, blue.

Tess

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by manipulatrix07/31/07

nice

like your use of line and rhythm ... seems to both slow down and speed up ... which seems right.

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by Bill Dada07/31/07

^

This is so good it... 'sips slowly.'

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