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Early Morning Awakening

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by Anonymous04/26/08

great story

One of the best I've read in a long time!!

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by Anonymous06/15/08

10/10

Very Good!

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by Anonymous08/05/09

just some thoughts

I thought it was interesting, it kept me into the story. I am not sure if it is because I am not used to thinking from a male point of view or what but I felt it lacked a little passion. It felt a little sterile with the words you used to decribe the actual anal sex. The beginning where you described the way the light shone on her pussy and how it made you feel was great I would have liked more of that, but all in all a good story I also like the ending where people were wondering what on earth caused you to look so disheveled and only you knew the truth. I look forward to reading more. I realize I have made grammatical errors lol I am just lazy!

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