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i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating i've given you is so that it does not affect future temp ratings. - wildsweetone.
I read it over,
four times and each time I fell deeper and deeper into the powerful depths of the poem. A truly remarkable choice of words that entice the mind and I'm sure they will linger with me all day long. Exceptionally well done and hardly worth mentioning what might be a tiny error. (bust)
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