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All Comments on 'Erotic Beltaine'

by praetorian13

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
pretty good

You should have checked for grammatical errors and some spelling errors that slipped by. I did enjoy the Thelonious Monk reference, an inside joke that many readers will miss.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
nice ending

This was a good read - if a little confused in the middle - excellent ending!

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 16 years ago
Amusing

The story was amusing and erotic as well, a nice combination.

A pity you had some errors in spelling. Mainly switching letters.

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