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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/05/07

pretty good

You should have checked for grammatical errors and some spelling errors that slipped by. I did enjoy the Thelonious Monk reference, an inside joke that many readers will miss.

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by Anonymous10/21/07

nice ending

This was a good read - if a little confused in the middle - excellent ending!

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by Black Tulip10/23/07

Amusing

The story was amusing and erotic as well, a nice combination.

A pity you had some errors in spelling. Mainly switching letters.

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