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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.
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Simply...
beautiful poetry and exceptionally well done. Thank you so much.
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More complex simplicity. I can't fathom it but I don't think I need to, it conjures up enough imagery to want to go with it.
wow
it took me four reads and i got it, thanks to the unusual language. utterly beautiful.
technically, i was torn between wanting punctuation added in and leaving it out. and then i realised, leaving it out gave me open boundaries, adding it in would lose something from the poem.
thank you for sharing this poem and for giving me much to think about.
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This fucking rocks 12. The language is amazing, it sounded so fine read aloud. It is so good to see your work again.
WSO
WOW, how nice to see it dawned on someone. And, yeh Bog, you can't get it, even the rose has a tendency to disappear.
oh
those last two lines, heartbreaker...
dawn diddy
dawnd on me that ur a pawmpuss arse
This is why people don't read poetry
Boring, boring, boring...
anon
do better,
can you?
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