- All
Comments (7) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
Subtle.
You write /really/ subtley. Like, its fluid and storyful, but doesn't take you on any rides or rollercoasters. I think its good stuff.
Great Stuff
Very Very good, a;mpst painful waiting for the next chapter
Well written draws you into the story
MORE! Please write MORE!
Great!
Really great writing! It's so real and involving, and shows really great insight into the characters' minds. Thank you! Write more!
Thank You
Thank you for the great series! I'm sorry that this is the last chapter. Wonderful work TxRad.
Love
I love these stories and hope there are more of them to come!!
This is how life should be
Fun and wonderfully arousing
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Toys are Us Ch. 04 or
More submissions by TxRad.