All Comments on 'Padre'

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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that will be cherished forever

there is deceptive simplicity in the language used in this poem. looking closer, i see some clever wording that has appeal for me. i think in line one, 'sunny' is a redundant word because the word 'blue' gives you already the picture of a sunny day.

i love the imagery and the alliteration enhances the images/sounds. thanks for sharing this one.

Very nice, the imagery made me feel like I was there. Thanks for the trip to the beach at Padre Island.

in the sun the taste of salt on your tongue, and the sea breeze caressing your face, can I have a little umbrella too? Thanks for another good read and smiles :)