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Thats pretty deep
Bill...and so much food for thought that I won't be hungry for a week.
I believe I got
lost in your painting of imagery and humor. Could be me but the last stanze did me in ~~ I love poems like this. I will get it ~!! More Please~~
trippy
I loved the ending. I dunno how you came up with this, but I hope you do some more.
You ever read Bill Knott?
Your poetry sort of reminds me of him. I liked this poem very much. Actually the other one, too. :)
five weeks...
wondered where you'd been (~_~) (grin) I always enjoy reading you!
WTF
What would have went on if this had went on for ten weeks? You got me wondering ~ I hear a little bit o' Syd.
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