All Comments on 'Give me the Darkness'

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 16 years ago
That last line ...

is a three pointer !! I love the darkness that surrounds your imagery and how you keep us spellbound with "what's next" and "where are we going?" ... Tight flow with a lot of twisty turns, love it ~!!! More Please ~~!!

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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A little erotic horror to help put a little chill in this +30° C day {that's +90° F old style}.

AngelineAngelineover 16 years ago
I like any poem that uses "spiderlings" so deftly

It's creepy and funny at the same time. It made me think of Ursela from Disney's The Little Mermaid. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
to the point but

"deepest soul" ? and the change of point of view from the doer to the victim is a little bland.

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