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Angel's Story Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/15/07

Very erotic story

Wow Mary what a great story. I can't wait to read about what happens next to little Angela. Thanks for a great read. Jeff

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by SoCalCynic11/05/10

Upholding Stereotypes

So, all women are teases and sluts, and men know better, and no means yes. A first chapter that guarantees this reader will go no further. Whatever writing talent you have is consumed by the totality of your lack of originality.

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by Anonymous05/28/11

That guy is right

Your story is the same as 1/3 of the non consensual stories. Bravo

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