All Comments on 'A Booth in a Dark Corner'

Great start 5142sb I could just imagine myself in that restaurant! Let us have more from you. You have a real talent for erotic detail. Well done.

No offense, but it wasn't a very good story. No plot, no attempt at defining the characters, no fear of being caught even though someone is the next stall. Wham, bam, no thank you, ma'am.

You can form complete sentences, but there's no build up at all to this. That's no fun. This is like something a guy would do with a hooker; belongs on a pornsite, not a site called "literotica". People here can, and want, to read erotica. They didn't get here hunting for the same crappy porn that's everywhere else.