This is the second submission of yours that I've read in as many days, and I like them more and more. I love your writing style. Enjoyed this particular one especially. Can't say I was prepared for the unexpected, shocking ending, but I like stories that dare to substitute fairytale conclusions with cliffhanger twists. I've noticed from your bio that you're relatively new to the site, so welcome to Literotica. I hope to read more of your work. Oh, and I like that new word, "eroticity". =P
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Anonymous08/15/07
Oh my gosh!
I couldn't believe the ending. You really can write. Keep turning them out, because your stories are so refreshing and unique.
English
You've done it again!
This is the second submission of yours that I've read in as many days, and I like them more and more. I love your writing style. Enjoyed this particular one especially. Can't say I was prepared for the unexpected, shocking ending, but I like stories that dare to substitute fairytale conclusions with cliffhanger twists. I've noticed from your bio that you're relatively new to the site, so welcome to Literotica. I hope to read more of your work. Oh, and I like that new word, "eroticity". =P
Oh my gosh!
I couldn't believe the ending. You really can write. Keep turning them out, because your stories are so refreshing and unique.
Bloddy Amazing
Your intro was ...stimulating. Thank you.
Wet Panties
Damned, another pair of damp panties consigned to the laundry basket. Care to fish them out and check mine...?
wow
why did she have to die?
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