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Huh ?
This story sucks... and not in a good way...
not bad
I like the story, but it ended too soon. Thanks
Good story
...and a good plot. Not all stories have to be 'Wham bang' Excellent first chapter for a serie. I hope you will have the inspiration to write such a serie.
Beautiful story...
with a delicious buildup. Its easy to understand the young girls apprehension (explained in the story). Rightly so, its in the Romance section and didn't need to be filled with Hot, Steamy sex. (maybe that will come at a later date). Loved it and hope that you can continue with another chapter.
C'est jolie!
Nice history between a young adult and an adult teenager, with the framework of the vineyards and French countryside.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
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