What is a morning wood?I had a loving relationship with my sister,in fact I loved her and still do more than my two wives,Wrat do you make of that?
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Anonymous08/16/07
spelling mistake
what
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Anonymous08/16/07
Comments
I cannot understand why people are so critical of the grammatical and spelling errors. Just leave comments on the story YOU chose to read, and do not worry yourself with other details. I'm sure the authors, having reread their submittals, realize their mistakes. Constructive criticism is what they are looking for, so just mention the need, if any, for spellcheck or proof-reading.
Enjoyed your story and look forward to your next installment.
I think one of the biggest reasons people complain about spelling and grammar is because spelling words properly is pretty basic to the craft of writing. If you don't care enough to run your story through spell check you are pretty damn lazy as an author and take NO pride in your craft. There are plenty of free spell checkers on the net, even free office type suites, so not spell checking is unforgivable. It's the same as not keeping track of your character's names, but don't get me started on that!
Second, bad spelling and grammar make it harder to read the story. When I read I'm trying to put myself into the world the writer is crafting and I get pulled completely out of that world if the author can't spell and can't write a decent sentence. I don't expect Hemmingway or Steven King on this site but geeze an author should be able to write a sentence that makes SOME sense.
Bottom line, I think it shows carelessness and sloppiness if an author doesn't spell check and use decent grammar. If he doesn't care about his/her story, why should I read it?
fdkman
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Anonymous08/17/07
ccc
dedd
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Anonymous08/17/07
SPELLING
There is not much wrong with this story that a little effort cannot put right,I was only pulling your leg about morning wood.Some people are far to serious.I meant what I said otherwise,keep writing.
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Anonymous08/21/07
Those who complain about errors etc never say ----
"If you want the see a well crafted story read ' ' which I wrote. The non writers do not understand how much effort goes into these stories for so little reward. After a time it's "The hell with it, if the nit pickers complain to hell with them." Sorry I can't give the name I write under--The last time I wrote a similar comment several reader sought out my stories and slammed them with poor marks.
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Anonymous03/23/08
big difference
if a writer is only writting for his/her enjoyment then spell and grammer don't matter but if they are submitting it for others to read then they better do it properly they owe it to the readers to make it as easy and as enjoable as possible for them not to give them a headache trying to understand what they are trying to say
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Anonymous04/18/08
Fo' sho.
Asian are hot, relations is hotter.
But who's done 'em both? My man Harry Potter!
Kickass story, made me want an asian sister. Anyways, next-step moving on, post another story. As long as we're clear on that part, ignore all these other grammer Nazi assholes.
Ya' dig?
You are now bound by LAW to post another story.
Failure to adhere will result in broken hearts/limbs.
No pressure.
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Anonymous06/13/08
Suggest that this guy learn a bit about a
HYMEN--Where it's located and how it gets broken
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Anonymous03/29/12
Ummm
Faintly displeased with your method of rubbing your jizz upon yourself.... I think almost every guy I know thinks of it like crap in their hands, however their not freaking out about it, ya get what I mean. I don't wish to discourage you, but I must say you might have a masculinity problem if you are a man. Ifnot, then now you know guys don't like their own stuff, unless it's going in/on somebody else. （＾∇＾）
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Anonymous11/07/15
Very erotic
Absolutely beautiful,hope you have more chapters.
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Anonymous09/30/16
Re:Ummmm
Not every guy acts like that about his own cum. Some do, but I've known equally as many completely masculine men that are perfectly comfortable with their cum. As a woman, the latter is far more sexy. Just sayin'.
English
What?
What is a morning wood?I had a loving relationship with my sister,in fact I loved her and still do more than my two wives,Wrat do you make of that?
spelling mistake
what
Comments
I cannot understand why people are so critical of the grammatical and spelling errors. Just leave comments on the story YOU chose to read, and do not worry yourself with other details. I'm sure the authors, having reread their submittals, realize their mistakes. Constructive criticism is what they are looking for, so just mention the need, if any, for spellcheck or proof-reading.
Enjoyed your story and look forward to your next installment.
Why People Comment on Spelling and Grammar
I think one of the biggest reasons people complain about spelling and grammar is because spelling words properly is pretty basic to the craft of writing. If you don't care enough to run your story through spell check you are pretty damn lazy as an author and take NO pride in your craft. There are plenty of free spell checkers on the net, even free office type suites, so not spell checking is unforgivable. It's the same as not keeping track of your character's names, but don't get me started on that!
Second, bad spelling and grammar make it harder to read the story. When I read I'm trying to put myself into the world the writer is crafting and I get pulled completely out of that world if the author can't spell and can't write a decent sentence. I don't expect Hemmingway or Steven King on this site but geeze an author should be able to write a sentence that makes SOME sense.
Bottom line, I think it shows carelessness and sloppiness if an author doesn't spell check and use decent grammar. If he doesn't care about his/her story, why should I read it?
fdkman
ccc
dedd
SPELLING
There is not much wrong with this story that a little effort cannot put right,I was only pulling your leg about morning wood.Some people are far to serious.I meant what I said otherwise,keep writing.
Those who complain about errors etc never say ----
"If you want the see a well crafted story read ' ' which I wrote. The non writers do not understand how much effort goes into these stories for so little reward. After a time it's "The hell with it, if the nit pickers complain to hell with them." Sorry I can't give the name I write under--The last time I wrote a similar comment several reader sought out my stories and slammed them with poor marks.
big difference
if a writer is only writting for his/her enjoyment then spell and grammer don't matter but if they are submitting it for others to read then they better do it properly they owe it to the readers to make it as easy and as enjoable as possible for them not to give them a headache trying to understand what they are trying to say
Fo' sho.
Asian are hot, relations is hotter.
But who's done 'em both? My man Harry Potter!
Kickass story, made me want an asian sister. Anyways, next-step moving on, post another story. As long as we're clear on that part, ignore all these other grammer Nazi assholes.
Ya' dig?
You are now bound by LAW to post another story.
Failure to adhere will result in broken hearts/limbs.
No pressure.
Suggest that this guy learn a bit about a
HYMEN--Where it's located and how it gets broken
Ummm
Faintly displeased with your method of rubbing your jizz upon yourself.... I think almost every guy I know thinks of it like crap in their hands, however their not freaking out about it, ya get what I mean. I don't wish to discourage you, but I must say you might have a masculinity problem if you are a man. Ifnot, then now you know guys don't like their own stuff, unless it's going in/on somebody else. （＾∇＾）
Very erotic
Absolutely beautiful,hope you have more chapters.
Re:Ummmm
Not every guy acts like that about his own cum. Some do, but I've known equally as many completely masculine men that are perfectly comfortable with their cum. As a woman, the latter is far more sexy. Just sayin'.
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